tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8704834206350230151.post2332022844718913982..comments2012-10-31T04:48:08.405-07:00Comments on Timothy Writes: The Iris GardenTimothy Collardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17820495113390056192noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8704834206350230151.post-74452621209900541772011-06-13T10:05:05.414-07:002011-06-13T10:05:05.414-07:00Thanks a lot for all your feedback - much apprecia...Thanks a lot for all your feedback - much appreciated!Timothy Collardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17820495113390056192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8704834206350230151.post-42305440796800565652011-06-04T20:16:04.124-07:002011-06-04T20:16:04.124-07:00Makes mental note to be wary of iris in the garden...Makes mental note to be wary of iris in the garden from now on! Nice story, flowed very well. Now I'm wondering who Mrs Kuroki is and how she controls those iris?<br /><br />Helen - helen-scribbles.comHelen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8704834206350230151.post-75558836350183662402011-05-27T10:48:45.155-07:002011-05-27T10:48:45.155-07:00The opening line made me imagine not a boy on his ...The opening line made me imagine not a boy on his bike, but hold it up and dancing. Was a little disappointed it didn't turn out that oddball. Keii's world is much more familiar than that, at least until he was swallowed.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8704834206350230151.post-24107215384622017222011-05-27T07:46:12.493-07:002011-05-27T07:46:12.493-07:00A nicely descriptive, and easy-flowing story that ...A nicely descriptive, and easy-flowing story that makes the transition from the everyday to the horrific quite convincingly.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.com